Starting with the Rough Draft

I am very confident in my research.I went into depth with the sources I wanted and knew I needed to succeed in writing this paper. My major setback was my thesis. there is a vast difference in the thesis between these rough drafts. My thesis was not providing structure for an argument, which is what I needed to write this paper smoothly. I chose to embrace my natural positivity to finish this paper strong. I chose to have a optimistic solutionfor my thesis. Luckily, I found evidence to support my optimism in hopes to end fermicide.

Final Draft

I have no suggestions from Professor B. 🙁 Nonetheless, I am ver proud of this research paper. I went the extra mile and wrote more. I still relate a lotto my reflection letter. This paper presented many challenges. Anyways, there has been a major shift in the paper where I discuss how to some the issue at hand instead of complain and be pessemistic. I do acknowledge that there could be a betten flow. but I think the flow at this state is good aIready.